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More Cynic than Saint

05/11/02

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More Cynic than Saint

Worked on revision of "Saint and Cynic." I'm beginning to hate the piece, I think. When I originally wrote it, I went for a parable tone, and people responded positively to that before. But when I read it now, I don't like that tone. It feels flat and lifeless. However, I don't have enough time to completely change the tone of the piece, so I guess I'll just have to grit my teeth and make the small changes for now.

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